Thursday, December 13, 2007

Bad Review Blog; Two Thumbs way up for A.G.

'American Gangster': An American Critique
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Fresh Air from WHYY, November 2, 2007 · The expansive new mob drama American Gangster stars Denzel Washington and Russell Crowe. Fresh Air's film critic says it's a whopping overdose of perverse '70s nostalgia, a panoramic portrait of a nation disintegrating from moral rot.
But the charismatic real-life monster who inspired the film — a druglord who exults in his scams and brags about his murders — has become so controlled, and domesticated, that even with Washington's star power, he doesn't carry the movie. Crowe, credible as an obsessed detective, helps somewhat. But ultimately the movie feels like Scarface drained of blood, at arm's length from the culture that spawned it.

In this writers attempt to compare this film to that of "Scare Face" instantly brings me to the assumption that I will not agree with anything this idiot has to say. The only complaint I had with the movie had to do with the length. If the time got trimmed down an hour it would be perfect.

Investigative Story; Virgina Tech Shooting

Massacre on a Managing Editor's First Day
At a National Writers Workshop this weekend, Collegiate Times' Bobby Bowman gave his first out-of-town speech on covering the Va. Tech shootings his first day on the job.
By Joe Grimm (more by author) Detroit Free Press recruiting & development editor
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On April 16, Bobby Bowman became a managing editor, a source, part of a story that devastated his university and one of its ambassadors -- all at once.The day that student Seung-Hui Cho killed 32 people at Virginia Tech University was Bowman's first day as a managing editor of the Collegiate Times. As a student affected by the tragedy, he was called by networks from FOX News to Al Jazeera. He later was approached on campus by Geraldo Rivera, who also asked him a few questions.
Bobby BowmanThis weekend was another first for Bowman. On his first business trip, he spoke at the National Writers Workshop in Wichita. He wore a maroon golf shirt bearing the now-familiar VT logo. The Wichita (Kan.) Eagle and Poynter co-sponsored the event. CT staff members confronted a story that would challenge even the most accomplished journalist. And many of them aren't even journalism majors. Bowman, 21, is studying industrial systems engineering. link is www.poynter.org/content/content_view.asp?id=4334 - 38k
One thing reporters do when trying to unearth a tuff story is to not give up, and keep on digging. They say that if you are looking to get the dirt then you need to be prepared to jump in the mud.

Dramatic Online Narrative; New Orleans Ordeal

Dramatic narrative of New Orleans ordeal
The story in question is being discussed widely online, and likely has been emailed all around the world. It is the tale of two visiting paramedics trapped in New Orleans during the hurricane, and it is a shocking narrative -- case upon case of the most brutal and callous official hostility and indifference.
The only problem is, I will bet the proverbial dollars to doughnuts that it is a fake.(What are we going to do when the price of doughnuts gets up to a dollar?).
We'll hear the definitive story before long, but even at first reading the story rings false, in much the same way as the CBS memos did just about exactly a year ago. Like the memos, it contains enough genuine material to convince those inclined to believe, but also enough problematical bits to give away the game. And like the memos, it is just too good to be true -- "good" in the sense of fitting the authors' political agenda (loony fringe radical socialist, in this case).
Again, there is no doubt that elements in the narrative reflect actual events. That they have been rewritten, spun, joined together, and added to, however, is equally beyond doubt.
I'm sure this is being discussed all over the place, but for now I'll point you to the thread at www.samizdata.net, where many of the points above have been argued with great specificity, yet where many commentors still attempt to defend the account by pointing to elements that are consistent with other news reports -- efforts that would be better spent tackling the inconsistencies, instead.
Posted by David on September 8, 2005 2:08 PM

Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Public Document; Goverment policy on disaster's

Anticompetitive Conduct After a Natural Disaster
In the wake of devastation caused by a natural disaster, the Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) works with state and local government agencies to solicit competitive bids for cleanup and rebuilding contracts. Anticompetitive conduct that subverts the competitive bidding process includes:
Bid rigging: Two or more firms agree to bid in such a way that a designated firm submits the winning bid.
Price fixing: Two or more competing sellers agree on what prices to charge, such as by agreeing that they will increase prices a certain amount or that they won't sell below a certain price.
Customer or market allocation: Two or more firms agree to split up customers, such as by geographic area, to reduce or eliminate competition.
These agreements are generally secret, and the participants defraud customers by holding themselves out as competitors despite their agreement not to compete. They harm consumers and taxpayers by causing them to pay more for products and services and by depriving them of other byproducts of true competition.

The steps I had to take in order to track down this particular public document wre few and easy. By simply attempting a basic Google search, I was able to locate a site that seemed to have been goverment funded. The site is www.usodoj.gov/atr/pubdocs.html

Blog I Like; "Oh Raiders, My Raiders"

O Raiders! My Raiders! O Raiders! my Raiders! our fearful trip is done;McCown throws naught but INTs, Jordan can scarcely run;The end is near, the horns I hear, the talking heads all staring,While follow eyes the silver and black, the D once grim and daring:But O sack! sack! sack!O the offense fled,Where on the field my Raiders lie,Fallen cold and dead.

In short, this blog is about the Oakland Raiders football team and their imberrising performance displayed in front of a national television audience. The reason I like this blog is because it is a spoof on another poem I know called "Oh Captain, My Captain". Sometimes being a Raider makes you feel as if you are the one lying dead in the middle of the field.

Narrative Story; Edison was no joke

THE FIRST EDISON CENTRAL STATION
A NOTED inventor once said at the end of a lifetime of fighting to defend his rights, that he found there were three stages in all great inventions: the first, in which people said the thing could not be done; the second, in which they said anybody could do it; and the third, in which they said it had always been done by everybody. In his central- station work Edison has had very much this kind of experience; for while many of his opponents came to acknowledge the novelty and utility of his plans, and gave him unstinted praise, there are doubtless others who to this day profess to look upon him merely as an adapter. How different the view of so eminent a scientist as Lord Kelvin was, may be appreciated from his remark when in later years, in reply to the question why some one else did not invent so obvious and simple a thing as the Feeder System, he said: "The only answer I can think of is that no one else was Edison."

The plot line in this narrative about Thomas Edison, gives reason for a cross examination of the accusation's that have previously been made by critiques of his work. The plot, leads the reader to believe that an unflattering picture will first be construed of Edison. Followed by evidence, and counter arguments that will intise the reader into believing that Edison was truly one of the greatest inventors ever to live.

Non-traditional lead; Tofu, a healthy substitute

For years a vegetarian staple, tofu is finally working its way into mainstream diets. Diehard meat-eaters are considering tofu products as a way to improve their diets and provide a variety of health benefits. High in protein, vitamins and minerals while low in calories, sodium and fat, tofu packs a one-stop nutritional punch not found in many other foods.



This article talks about the many benefits one can gain from eating a steady diet of tofu. It is an nontraditional lead due to the fact that there is nothing in the lead that would constitute as being attention grabbing.



In my opinion I would label this a luggage lead because the writer piles to many facts and ideas into the lead. At the same time by having such a content heavy lead it is still unclear what exactly the main concept of the article is about.



Is the article talking about the high number of people who are switching to vegetarianism, or is the article supposed to be about the health benefits of eating tofu. After reading a lead their should be no doubt in the readers mind what it is that story is about.

News Follow Feature; Manchester United

Cristiano Ronaldo may be considered the ace in United's pack when it comes to tricks, but against Blackburn Rovers Ryan Giggs was on top form, showing he possesses the touch to rival any of the new kids on the block.

Ronny got the goals to win the match in the first half, but after the break Giggsy turned on the style and ran the Rovers defence ragged.

"I thought Ryan was absolutely fantastic, particularly in the second half," Sir Alex said afterwards. "You look at him today and see the freshness he shows, I think he can go on for years."

This article is a news follow feature that I took from the official Manchester United we site. What makes this article a news follow feature is the use of action verbs and the way people themselves are used to tell the story.

The article starts off by introducing tension in the form of a argument about who is the most beneficial player on the squad.

Thursday, November 29, 2007

Blog Free Week; Matt's jump

Monkey Canyon has long been known by many, as one of the highest and most dangerous cliff diving locations in the entire greater Los Angeles are,

Fomouse for it's highest jump that stands over 50 feet above the some what shallow waters below. When attempting this jump it is impossible to see where it is you will be jumping to due to the fact that the water is unvisable. The only way to succesfully jump from there is to use a running start.

Over the years there have been three deaths in the Canyon due to people jumping off the cliffs. In all cases the cause of death was blunt force trauma to the skull and brain. A risk that is known by everfyone who attempts thye jump, yet when weighted against the adrenaline rush of jumping, it seems most just let go and try to fly.

Hopefully vistors that use the Canyon can learn to appriciate such a rare find for a metropolitan city, such as Los Angeles. Only time will tell, and time is something that the Canyon definetly has pleanty of.

Thursday, September 27, 2007

Community Journalism;Caruso's II Fine Italian Cuisine


Caruso's II is a family owned and operated business that has been serving the Santa Clarita Valley for over 20 years. The Caruso family migrated to the United States from Palermo, Sicily.
The modo at Caruso's is to make all of our customers feel like they are one of the family.
Open Tuesday through Sunday for Lunch and Dinner, come on in and enjoy an authentic Sicilian meal. Cooked up just like Mama used to make.
This is a community journalism piece due to the fact that it is delivering a helpful and informative message to a specific community.
Residents of the Santa Clarita Valley will know have a universal outlook on the type of establishment Caruso's really is.

Thursday, September 20, 2007

;This Morning

As his shadow cast through the hallway, Matthew Nicchitta realized he was being followed. When the shadow got closer Matthew then knew it was the Dean of Athletics coming to ball him out for not finishing his paperwork.

Matthew knows better than to show up not having done his work. However, the Dean of Athletics must understand that Matthew is only one man, and can’t be every where at once.

The Dean and Matthew argued intensely as nothing got accomplished. Matthew then knew he would have to give in to his boss. We both knew this would not be the last time we would be meeting like this.

Thursday, September 6, 2007

Intro Blog; My Friday Night Lights

This Friday night two Valley powers collide when the Verdugo Hills Dons of Tujunga travel to face off against the Caveliers from Cleveland High School of Reseda. The game is sure to be a good one as both teams enter the season loaded with talent and high expectations. Be sure to check the papers on Saturday morning to find out how the game played out.

This is a good way to give an intro about myself. By showing my love for football and coaching young men, an attempt is made in trying to allow the reader to formulate an opinion of me on their own.